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A Fool and a Broken Heart

Sometimes, one prefers believing other than he sees
One likes to think something true, though he knows not
In lies, hopes and vain beliefs he’s at ease
But, in the end, he’s just another in the lot;

Such a fool I have been, simply to have wished
That, one day, you would smile back, eyes shiny
I chuckle with tears when I think to the hopes I polished
That, your hand held into mine, you’d say you like me

The afflicting thought of your rejection haunts my mind, unbearable
I can remember your mocking face when you laughed at me
My heart is torn, broken and has yet to be repaired, so fragile
Left alone, there is nothing I want to do; nothing I find funny

I wonder if I can ever forget your long, ebony hair
If I can ever forgive myself for dreaming the way I did
Will I smile again? Can I once more think this world fair?
I need to get rid of that emotion that, for so long, I hid;
Every glimpse of happiness and innocence fades away
My mind is dark, surrounded by a cloud, thick and gray

But, sincerely, I do not regret to have asked, not one bit
As I know my tender heart, one day, will admit
That you might not be feeling the same way than I
And I deem a broken heart and a good lesson is worth better than a vain lie
:iconmaster-tonio:
I have not really lived this...but yknow, i love to talk about love (surely the nicest emotion after hatred). Hope u guys understand the poem, or at least interprate it in a nice way xD. Comments appreciated!

(btw, been trying to find a decent title, help required)
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:iconaeonghe:
Ah...how touching...
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:iconamy-wamy:
it's a very beautiful poem (:
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:iconmizzrozi14:
Beautiful.

I think you have felt this but never told anyone. Hmmm...?

:)
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:iconmaster-tonio:
Well...actually i did...but that was like 7 years ago..and she didnt have ebony hair lol.
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:iconaliwoo:
~Aliwoo Apr 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Don't change anything.

It's perfect.

You would never know you hadn't been through this.
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:iconmaster-tonio:
thanks alot!!! (uhh i dont get that last part of ur msg; "you never know you hadnt been through this"?)
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