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Cemetery

I laid my head against the cold stone
Hands over face, tears rolling down my cheek
Grieving over my lost throne
Weak amongst the weak

Flying to my side, the crow
Undying bearer of my sorrow
I let it carry the crystal pieces,
Remnants of my broken dreams
Let the thorns of the withered roses
Pierce my torn soul’s desperate screams

The moon to cast its shadow on my peaceful face
While I remember how you walked on my core
For me to praise memories of your grace
When there is nothing worth fighting for;
You have left me standing alone
Away from your warm, comforting light
Lost once again in my eternal night
Heart drenched into hatred of my own

You have opened the gates to this new world
Pushed me into venturing where lies misery
Guided my steps as my faith slowly scattered
And left me, broken, lone and lone to be;
Here, where no heart stands complete,
I now grasp how naive I have been
And yet cannot blame you your sin
For I have but earned my seat

I know the ways of my soul
Know there is to be another scar
Let me forget and once more be fooled
Turn my eyes and see the stars
Looking for a title.

Wrote this while i was supposed to be working. bleh.

*Yawn*
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misstonio Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
c triste et trés trés bo t tros doué pour écrir des poème......mon tit gothique XD
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
XDD
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yolso Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008  Student Writer
Wow, absolutely amazed of your language and style :)


fav
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008
I'm so glad! very much appreciated indeed :)
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yolso Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Student Writer
you deserve it :)
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Saoirse-O-Sullivan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
I really like the language and imagery in this! Very well done! :clap:
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
thanks dear :D
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool, makes alota images in my heaaad =0 !!

Well ahem, negative as always * exaspered eyes * .. I'll forgive you if you get on msn =/
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
thanks dear. and i wasnt home this weekend. and im working now and its already late afternoon. and tmorow's booked full
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DUUDE I MISS YOU

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I wanna see you, play HD with you or atleast have a good chat :'(
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008
me too dude, me too. maybe next weekend
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never this week ? Dude I need to talk about stuff or I'll go depress =w=;
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008
ok then. i shall come
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great :D

Anyhow, MDP and you kinda get my moral up :P

Music too .. and some other peeps on MSN XD
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
im glad to hear i can be of help :)
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KrystalTM Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sad and horribly inevitable. Someone's going to be left alone like that one day... :(. That's why it's so important to love while you live and always tell people how you feel about them. Je t'aime, mon cher.
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
i love you
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Michedepain Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
Finalement, du Master-Tonio. Et du sombre avec ça! Excellent pour l'Halloween!
:lol:
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:iconmaster-tonio:
Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
ravi de te ravir mon cher
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Michedepain Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
:D
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Aeonghe Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008
A very sad and dark rhymes.
Yet, I feel an eerie elegance hidden in mysterious language.

It's sad, yes, the world is cold :(
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
i wish i did not agree
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:iconaeonghe:
Aeonghe Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008
But you have to admit the truth, bitter much :(
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Master-Tonio Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
by times
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
World is cold .. well thats relative ..
The world can be cool sometimes too ..
C'mon yall pep it up a bit =w=
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Aeonghe Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
:D It's near winter, and it's still hot from where I'm standing :D
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IIIXandaP Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O: !
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