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The discovery of a poet by ~Master-Tonio:iconMaster-Tonio:



The discovery of a poet

It was a week’s night, a usual, dull evening
When you typed me a nice “hi”, cheering
With a smile, I answered a common “hey”
Far from knowing how would this end,
The conversation turned a pleasant way;
Talking about poetry with a friend,
Sending a few poems you kindly admired
Your gentle replies delighting my morose spirit
Making my heart bump, no more was I tired
Into my gloomy life, a pretty light you lit

Never could you write well you then told me
But I knew this to be a false belief, truly
And I advised you to try, just one sonnet
You said you’d do one little attempt
But I could still feel some contempt
Anyone with emotions can be a poet
And I deemed you would make a wonderful writer;

I couldn’t wait to read your poem, and a week later
You showed me deep, beautiful and striking writing
I was astonished by the talent, filled with satisfaction
You even wrote one for me, melting my heart, rejoicing
You were a poet, It felt like I had completed a mission
I thank you and hope you keep on making me beam
Keep on writing…forever…there is no nicer dream
©2008 ~Master-Tonio
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A poem I wrote for someone. She writes very well...and i did this for her, because she started writing after talking to me. The poem is not extraordinary...but i really felt like uploading
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~Michedepain:iconMichedepain: May 8, 2008, 4:42:40 PM
Another beautiful one!
~IIIXandaP:iconIIIXandaP: May 9, 2008, 4:45:51 AM
That's pretty awesome ! Luv it !

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~Aliwoo:iconAliwoo: May 9, 2008, 3:00:00 PM
That's really sweet... I'm sure she'll love it.

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~Master-Tonio:iconMaster-Tonio: May 9, 2008, 3:08:51 PM
i think she did like it ok

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~Aliwoo:iconAliwoo: May 9, 2008, 3:10:02 PM
:DGood

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Here is the church and here is the steeple
We sure are cute for two ugly people
Don't see what anyone can see
In anyone else
But you :heart:

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~Kimoss:iconKimoss: May 10, 2008, 1:17:27 AM
more poetry less war! great job :D

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